Friday, February 12, 2016

"You cant handle the truth!": a formalist perspective of Heart of Darkness - A Read Along Journal



  • The sentence structure is extremely varied. There are a lot of complex sentences, and simple sentences. 
  • The author seems to go in depth. The essay is filled with the examples from the text, which increases the effectiveness of the analysis. 
  • First paragraph intros the book  and the importance of an analysis.
  • He  reveals the advantages of using a formalist lens.
  • He gives a breifsummary of the book. 
  • Thesis statement is clear and and thoughtful in the first paragraph. 
  • Block quotes are present to enhance the analysis. This brings the evidence into the paper to improve the analysis.
  • In text citation are present to reference back to the book. Uses a specific format (Author's Last name, Page number)
  • Claim is  strong. The author  uses evidence and a good analysis to prove the claim. 
  • Recalls certain moments in the book and follows with a quote. 
  • the author gives more information on the quote and connects it to the claim.   
  • Uses literary devices to enhance the essay and analysis.
  • Work cited is only the book itself.

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